Saturday, July 31, 2010

The Type Of Classes That I Detest

How do you feel when you are in a class with full of distractions that make you uncomfortable? I am sure you will start to complain and detest the classes. Or try to find another class which is more suitable and comfort for you. There are a few types of classes which i dislike the most.

Firstly, the types of classes with bad timing. Bad timing classes especially night classes is unsafe for me. For instance, i have to drive alone all the way down and back form university during the night with fear. It is very dangerous for a girl like me because this is the time when those " criminal" start to take actions. Besides that, afternoon classes is also consider bad timing for me. This is because at that moment, the weather is so hot until it make me drowsy and feel tired. Meanwhile, i will start to yawn and fall asleep during the lessons. Another bad timing is the classes which stuck between my meal time. I will feel very uncomfortable when my my brain tried to focus on the lectures but my stomach busy "shouting for food ".

Subsequently, the classes that i detest are classes with bad lectures. First of all, the lecturers have no sense of humor. i known this is unfair if i blame that by this, but the lecturers will make the classes more into mute situation, and students will shift their attention on other things instate of listening to the lectures. I do dislike the type of lecturers which is too serious or like scolding people without reasonable explanation. In this case, when i saw the lecturer which deadpan expression, no smile but only serious on the face, i definitely will become moody for the coming lectures. Sometimes, the lectures are too long until no break between it. The continued lectures will make me difficult to concentrate and my poor mind will lost focusing and move to dream world. =___="

Furthermore, the type of classes that i detest include classes which is in bad condition. The class facility are inadequate. For example, the lights is not functioning, so i am forced to study in the darkness, the air-conditioner also not function well, then i feel sitting inside a big "oven", that is so fluffy. Sometimes, annoying people round me also one of the reason i dislike the classes. For instance, someone which likes to make noises, speak impolitely during the classes but never pay any attention. When they miss any important topics that lecturers taught, she or he panic and will try to get information form other. Thus, this is unfair and considered a disturbance for other people.

In summary, there are many types and reasons why i detest the classes. Although my dislike are more then like, i will still try my best to like and appreciate it.

1 comment:

Jasline said...

Dearest Elaine,

Thank you for the essay, which is very clear and well supported with properly thesis and topic sentences ^^. Good!

There are some errors that I have found that I would like to bring to your attention ya ^^:


Bad timing classes especially night classes is unsafe for me. ~is should be are since the subj is classes.

Another bad timing is the classes which stuck between my meal time. stuck should be replaced with clash

i known this is unfair if i blame that by this, but the lecturers will make the classes more into mute situation, ~ this sentence should be reworded as: I know it is unfair to blame the lecturers for this but sometimes the way they teach can really make everyone feel restless and speechless ^^ hehe

the type of lecturers which is too serious ~ which should be who since you are referring to lecturers ya and which can be used for things and animals ehem...

the lights is ~ should be are.

annoying people round me also one of the reason i dislike the classes. missing verb should have 'are'.

Nonetheless the ideas are still crystal clear ^^

Thank you for the effort ^^

All de best and continue writing.

Thank you for the patience shown ^^

Luv,
Ms Jasline